CITRINE

[dramatispersonae]

You're in a small grove of trees off the side of the road. Somehow, their thick leaves muffle all sound from beyond, leaving only faint whispers and echoes at the fringe of your hearing.

Comments

Re: DISCUSSION

[firstflower]

"You are unsure if a pathological response, if necessary, a bad thing..."

...Maybe an 'is' fell out somewhere.

Re: DISCUSSION

[bitesonce]

It could something like, "feeling unsure is a pathological response, it's not necessarily a bad thing"

Re: DISCUSSION

[firstflower]

...Oh! That makes sense.

Re: DISCUSSION

[bitesonce]

Feeling unsure is not necessarily a bad thing, it's a pathological response...

Something like that.

Re: DISCUSSION

[firstflower]

That sounds a bit better.

Re: DISCUSSION

[archerinred]

[will just sit back and marvel at how you people manage to make sense of that wordy mess...]

Re: DISCUSSION

[bitesonce]

[because they're nerds]

Feeling unsure is not necessarily a bad thing, it's a pathological response...

Re: DISCUSSION

[archerinred]

[raises his eyebrows]

You think feeling unsure is a pathological thing? Like being paranoid...?

Re: DISCUSSION

[bitesonce]

I think that's what the message says.

But sure, it can be. Like instinct.

Re: DISCUSSION

[archerinred]

Yeah, makes sense.

Re: DISCUSSION

[archerinred]

You're really good at this, Plum. Maybe we can just add the "is" in?

Re: DISCUSSION

[firstflower]

"You are unsure if a pathological response, if necessary, is a bad thing."

Or it's something like what Rocky has.

Re: DISCUSSION

[archerinred]

Yeah, Rocky's guess seems to make more sense...

I got nothing better to offer than your guesses, though.

Re: DISCUSSION

[firstflower]

We can go with Rocky's since it makes the most sense.

Re: DISCUSSION

[archerinred]

Okay, sure.