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dramatispersonae) wrote2011-02-05 06:53 pm
dramatispersonae) wrote2011-02-05 06:53 pm
Entry tags:
endless, fish, romance, cages (metaphorical), snow sports, blood, deception, licking, redundancy, baseball bat
So a professional baseball person decides to play some snow sports and brings his pet fish with him. There he meets Nancy Nancy who lives an empty life of being famous that she cannot break free of.
And she lies and says she's a nun. Then they have a slightly bloody sex scene.
And she lies and says she's a nun. Then they have a slightly bloody sex scene.
[the rest of that was fine but]
What is baseball?
What is baseball?
No idea but balls are for games.
Because I have two memories and one involves an Abbey.
A fisherman is trapped in a metaphorical cage of poverty. He finds a magic baseball bat that makes him rich and powerful! He plays a game in the snow and finds romance in when he hits a ball that lands on someone's head. Maybe there's blood there.
...I don't know about deception or the others.
...I don't know about deception or the others.
The woman have to be a deception.
Then maybe they can dance first and it feels endless because they're really into it.
Good point.
Perhaps it would be wise to discuss presentation.
Perhaps it would be wise to discuss presentation.
Where can redundancy work into this?
That's why I named her Nancy Nancy...
Can you think of something better? Maybe we can name her Young Woman.
The Young Woman named Young Woman. And the Young Man named Young Man.
Can you think of something better? Maybe we can name her Young Woman.
The Young Woman named Young Woman. And the Young Man named Young Man.
Or she could be the bat! The bat who turned into a person.
I think it's a game where you hit a ball with a stick and run around.
It is one option. Creativity seems to be valued.
Lets combine the best parts of our stories. Your story, the names I came up with, and the girl can really be famous but lies and says she's a nun.
That sounds astoundingly pointless.
We could make it a play since there's two characters.
Great idea. It'll be a good story!
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