virtuallyroyalty: (Ignored Epiphany)
Kazuki Naruse ([personal profile] virtuallyroyalty) wrote in [personal profile] dramatispersonae 2012-09-23 02:42 am (UTC)

Re: GENERAL DISCUSSION

If you want to make it inspiring, maybe go into how hard it was to get the food! Something about how your team was struggling to make ends meet, and that the Monsters were just the cherry on top... or maybe your clothes got ruined while looking for food! And who sent the assassin anyway? Someone Carnelian was in competition for food with? You gotta think the story through, make the audience really identify with ya!

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