KUNZITE

[dramatispersonae]

You're in a small grove of trees off the side of the road. Somehow, their thick leaves muffle all sound from beyond, leaving only faint whispers and echoes at the fringe of your hearing.

Comments

Re: DISCUSSION

[shednotearsformagic]

You're not used to a lot of old English texts, I take it? This is very much that sort of style.

Re: DISCUSSION

[supersensitive]

Some of it is just incorrect though, right? Like, "a shameful prejudices"... And a lot of the statements connected by commas really don't ever have a clear subject or anything. I think it's a good interpretation, but I'd like to see what we can get through rearranging things, too...

Re: DISCUSSION

[shednotearsformagic]

Things could be bad, hopefully you are not, with shameful prejudice. But fine, fine.

"To some models beloved to the people of this," is still a 'to people I am fond of' in some capacity.